Faulty Parallels

 Even professional writers can create faulty parallels, like this one that came up in  my editing: "Jones said his customers prefer LEDs because they run cooler, are more energy efficient and lightweight.” But when pieces that are supposed to attach to a stem in the same way don't, your message can get bent out of shape.

 

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