Paris Is a Place ... Clauses That State the Obvious

 

Paris is a place that attracts many tourists ...

The main clause of any sentence is valuable real estate. Don't waste it on empty statements when you can use it for real information instead: Paris attracts many tourists. Here's how to spot and eradicate empty clauses in your writing.

 

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